Sunday, September 20, 2015

Girl- Jamaica Kincaid. - Vedica Bhasin

Girl By Jamaica Kincaid
-       Vedica Bhasin
  The story begins with specified instructions on how to execute certain daily chores and continues to instruct (without a single full stop- an element that perhaps reflects the frustration of the writer who is at the receiving end of the instruction) through the story.  A story without any structural fragmentation in my opinion almost reflected the monotony of the instruction- one that could have easily been extracted from a lecture at a Victorian era college for women or at a finishing school.
  The writer uses great detail to emphasise the importance of and precision with which the discussed instruction should be carried out (for example- “white clothes on Monday.. Color clothes on Tuesday”).

  The short but impactful story carries the hidden theme of social standing of women, especially in comparison to that of a man. I found it interesting that Monday and Tuesday, otherwise typically working days were chosen to discuss the nitty-gritties of cloth washing while the ‘playing’ with marbles or perhaps any other form of non-chore related time expenditure was to be enjoyed only by men. This idea was resisted explicitly in the story -  “you are not a boy, you know”). The repetitive use of the word “slut” is almost used as a threat that highlights the re-enforcement of social regulations on the writer. Simultaneously, the teachings about diplomacy paired with the last line of the story that almost completely puts on the contrary all the instruction initially  put forth exposes the superficiality of what is being demanded of the writer.

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